read the supervisor feedback:
Let me begin clearly with the observation that you have chosen not to take the advice I gave you in April (over two long emails and which I have inserted below in the interests of clarity). I asked you to work on your original data as that is what is significantly underdeveloped. In response, you have sent me an isolated literature review chapter with no page numbers, frequently incorrect English, inconsistent and sometimes wrong citations, and no bibliography. Nonetheless this is a matter for your choice. I am not sure that if, by this stage, you cannot see that a literature review without a bibliography is academically incomplete, I can expect to persuade you otherwise.
> As to what you have submitted: the standard of your work in this version of the chapter has admittedly improved, but it is still some distance from the formal or intellectual norms required by the second and third reviewers for a successful defence. As an indication, perhaps unfortunately, the opening sentence of the substantive review is an unsubstantiated claim about the origins of stress!
> Where is it that I have not been clear that this is not acceptable?
> I attach the draft with over 60 comments. I got to 50 in the first 11 pages and then sampled further on to see if the standard was the same: the English appears to deteriorate as the chapter progresses.
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