The document you are to read is a fictional business proposal aimed at the senior management of a fictional company Tangle Corp. This proposal is an attempt by members of the junior management team to convince the key senior decision makers of the value of such an investment for the business and why they should approve it.
You are to analyse and discuss the strengths and weaknesses of this business proposal to achieve its intended purpose in three key areas as follows:
•The format, structure, layout, and flow of the message in the document. Explore how the points made are structured and sequenced, and how they interact to form a clear and compelling message.
•The language style, written expression, context, and other aspects of written business communication. How the author has used language to express their points? How that might impact the effectiveness of the document?
•The persuasiveness of the actual message, its use of SPIN and similar ideas, its ability to conjure support and buy-in from its audience, and the overall compelling effectiveness of the document.
In all cases above you may include any recommendations for improvement of the document if that helps you make your points. You can also highlight specific examples of success or strength in the document to help make your points.