Please use proper case. Use upper case letter for the beginning of every word with the exception of “the”, “of”, “on” and “in”. “EXAMINING THE IMPACT OF DIRECT MARKETING ON CUSTOMER LOYALTY IN SAMSUNG PRODUCTS IN NEW JERSEY” –Page 1 Feedback: “Please make sure the page number from this page starts with number one (1) not (3) as you presently have it.” Introduction Page 3 of original document.
“While the competitiveness is increasing in all industries around the world, more companies are realizing that customer purchasing behaviors are changing. This has led to the adoption of direct marketing in an attempt to develop relationships with customers in an attempt to enhance brand loyalty.” Page 3 Feedback: Consider removing one of the “in an attempt” since this was used twice in the same sentence.
